I've been following this game for a while now, and I'd would just like to say that I like it very much, one of my favorites. But one thing that I'd like to point, is that I think that there shouldn't be a "Lesbian Mode". Not because I dislike it, quite the contrary, but I think that in a multiple choice, Ren'Py game, the things that change in the Lesbian Mode should be choosable.
I do really prefer the history line in Lesbian Mode for the lesbians (obliviously), but I'd think that it would be better to have the choice. Like pick all girls and some guys, or some guys and and some girls, and so on. That's why when I first played it, I was playing it with it off. But then I realized how much the Lesbian Mode changed the game.
One possible way I'd play is get all girls when possible, and if some wild guy appears I'd get him too (a lesbian inclined bisexual, might I say). I know that in Lesbian Mode it kinda does that, but still removes a lot of choices that I could be making. But that's just my personal opinion.
Adding to this, there is also some incoherencies on the story. Like on Chapter 18 on Luna's POV, if she already had sex like 2 time lol.
That aside, I still love it and think that it's an amazing game with a great storytelling and great characters. Keep up the good work, developer!