VN Ren'Py Abandoned Detective Life [v0.2] [Adults city]

[TheKingCobra]

In the next update i"ll add a phone featured so you can see the character state (love-corruption-etc).
The thing is, I start learning renpy programming daz3d and English only a few months ago.
NTR was not planning for this game but one of my patrons suggest it, and I say, why not.
I didn't realize that NTR will cause a problem if it is avoidable.
The problem with English is solved because i"m not gonna release anything before getting a proofreader.

NTR is always a touchy subject with some people, regardless of context or validity. I say don't worry too much about it. The people that get scared of simply by the term are hopefully offset by the people who want to play your game for the NTR.

EDIT, MAJOR EFFING EDIT: Did you just say that you started learning English only a few months ago????

 

[E.l.l.0]

In the next update i"ll add a phone featured so you can see the character state (love-corruption-etc).
The thing is, I start learning renpy programming daz3d and English only a few months ago.
NTR was not planning for this game but one of my patrons suggest it, and I say, why not.
I didn't realize that NTR will cause a problem if it is avoidable.
The problem with English is solved because i"m not gonna release anything before getting a proofreader.

I think your game has great potential as it is. Don't quit the NTR just because of some sour comments. I think your game formula is good the way it is; I would just add some investigation gameplay mechanics in it, like I stated in a previous comment.

 

[Walter Victor]

If you help the stripper, there will be many event and scenes with her in the future.
The school principle either, if she gives you her number

Well, the MC is going to have to ask the principal again, since not a single variable was updated based on asking for her number.

 

[JokerOfTorment]

I do like that their was a choice to scare off the wife's co worker guy during the pool table game scene and the MC takes it serious though odd he didn't confront the wife about it after and use it against her as a corruption option lol.

 

[Himerios]

Don't worry, many people that complain about it, don't even know what ntr is. They just have their own preconceived idea about it, and they must be right, and whoever says otherwise must be wrong.

I think it is because they have bad experiene with ntr games. Many ntr games are total crap, they come mostly with humilation, where the mc is a total beta/sissy. I for myself don't like (forced) ntr neither, but if it is the result of my stupid decisions, then I'm fine with it.

... The problem with English is solved because i"m not gonna release anything before getting a proofreader.

I wouldn't break my head on it, as long as we can understand what you meant, it is alright. I would suggest to release an alpha version, were the community can fix some mistakes and give you some suggestions. After that, you fix everything and release a beta/final version.

Between I'll keep an eye on this game, seems promising. Thumbs up ^^

 

[FrostWrym]

Nice game

 

[botc76]

I will mourn the day this game gets a proofreader, I lmao'ed playing through it.

 

[Thanos247]

Just imagine if I couldn't stand some NTR in a porn game, how would I be able to watch Game of Thrones. Seriously though, thank you for the NTR and the option for people to avoid it. While I personally don't mind some NTR in the game (if its done right and not just to be there), I know some people want that choice to skip it. I look forward to seeing future updates.

 

[Kappa Zappa]

The engrish is hilarious. Keep up the NTR content please!

 

[trdx]

Just imagine if I couldn't stand some NTR in a porn game, how would I be able to watch Game of Thrones.

Who is the MC in GoT, though? If there is no such character, then there is no NTR. You need to be personally involved first.

 

[Samken]

This project like many others is in serious need of a proofreader or at least the use of

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, because the level of Engrish present here is on a level of its own.

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[Paslicivi]

My english too bad. But this game have a another level...

 

[E.l.l.0]

I sometimes complain about the engrish in games, too. But in this case I understood everything (probably) and like many of you pointed out: it's actually funny. Plus, I like the theme and the tags, and the girls, and I didn't want to be one more to add complaints that could discourage the dev. I think it is a promising game and the dev stated actually starting to learn English, as well as daz3d and renpy programming, only a few months ago. So, try to be a little bit understanding. I bet that in the dev's native language, reading "gay" would sound just like reading "guy" in English.

 

[achref]

I sometimes complaint about the engrish in games, too. But in this case I understood everything (probably) and like many of you pointed out: it's actually funny. Plus, I like the theme and the tags, and the girls, and I didn't want to be one more to add complaints that could discourage the dev. I think it is a promising game and the dev stated actually started to learn English, as well as daz3d and renpy programming, only a few months ago. So, try to be a little bit understanding. I bet that in the dev's native language, reading "gay" would sound just like reading "guy" in English.

Yes, they sound the same!

 

[Walter Victor]

This project like many others is in serious need of a proofreader or at least the use of

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I figured she just doesn't like jazz trumpet music.

 

[t77]

I like what I have played of this game. Yes, the English isn't perfect. However for the length of time the developer has been learning the English language, it is pretty good.

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

Game good same like Ghost revenge,
Girls looks beautiful.
But dialogues are so short that only bad to game is too fast finishing...
Thanks for sharing, keep it up

 

[TheKryptonian]

Don't worry, many people that complain about it, don't even know what ntr is. They just have their own preconceived idea about it, and they must be right, and whoever says otherwise must be wrong.

Truth.

I used to think I just hate all NTR but then I realized its just the hardcore end of it that grinds my gears (cuck, humiliation stuff).

 

[ThunderRob]

The amount of NTR bashing and the amount of blessings the DEV is getting for avoidable NTR makes me wonder if I really sold my soul to the devil for liking a particular fetish in a fictional adult game universe.

gotta respect everyones fetish..but also praise those that gives a choice to avoid it,if it is not our own..and because this dev has given us the greatest NO option yet there is alot of chatter about it..lol

 

[Shirafune]

What a fuck he doing?