VN Ren'Py Abandoned Eye of the Storm [Ch. 1-12] [Mr. Rigg]

[Dependable_223]

basically tells you in the update...ya..i've fucked it all up for you being loyal to Lena or whoever ya choose..but i'll fix it if i hit my patreon goals..LOL...really makes playing the choices a "who the fuck cares" situation..because for two updates in a row we made choices and get a "message" it'll be assumed we did something even if we didnt..that REALLY destroys the want to keep playing..once fine..but two updates in a row..pfffttt..
i mean..Zenny says basically go away perv..no sex..next scene..Lena running away because you just had sex with Zenny...thats just really crappy..dont even release an update if you are gonna pull that shit.

If those path where not finished then the game should have ended before the crap was added what you did not do.. like you normally see in other games when their are different paths now it just a clusterfuck of events that never took place.. This is not only killing all immersion but also the game in general.. I also changed mc name to cuck boy instead of Ape..

What pissed me off was the part where i was telling Lena i never cheated on her and really i never did, but the game still made sure i did even though i didn't.. Does that make any sense ?? At the end of previous chapter where you are forced tohave sex with zenny and suddenly everyone is around you including Lena this was the part i decided i will not play this game unless these path get fixed..

The way the story progressing is the story is simply S_H_I_T now.. This story seem to have a Harem tag but how is this going to be harem if all your doing is making sure you never end with harem or even any of the girls ??

Maybe when we get the ending we will get the only one where the storm kills everyone including the mc or mc is the sole survivor.. That would be one big harem no..

 

[Deleted member 396172]

that was a weird update , what the developer thinking

 

[MorganFreemansToe]

Man this is one of the stupidest updates I've seen from a game in a while.

 

[Carpe Stultus]

basically tells you in the update...ya..i've fucked it all up for you being loyal to Lena or whoever ya choose..but i'll fix it if i hit my patreon goals..LOL...really makes playing the choices a "who the fuck cares" situation..because for two updates in a row we made choices and get a "message" it'll be assumed we did something even if we didnt..that REALLY destroys the want to keep playing..once fine..but two updates in a row..pfffttt..
i mean..Zenny says basically go away perv..no sex..next scene..Lena running away because you just had sex with Zenny...thats just really crappy..dont even release an update if you are gonna pull that shit.

Man you are so right and i came here to write a rant about it too, but you beat me to it. I'm really annoyed with that shitty move.

Is it that bad?
so this "game" bacame a kinetic novel or just a linear VN with a little bit of choices?
How are the choices effect the game?

Yes it is that bad, especially if you tried to dodge everything possible because you are interested in a certain character the game screws you over and says "haha you fucker did this and this" even if you didn't...your choices mean nothing.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

it is still a vn with choices...but for two updates..some of the choices are null and void because the dev hasnt gotten around to creating the effects of said choices..so gives you a message that the game will see things as ya boinked everyone anyways and if we want to speed things up to become a patron..lol

Another case of Shadows over Manston: too many choices for the dev to handle, it seems. It wouldn't be as bad — still bad, but not as bad — if he released multiple iterations of the same version (like Chapter 10 v0.1L was Ape staying true to Lena, Chapter 10 v0.2H was Ape cheating with Haley, then Chapter 10 v0.3Z was public sex with Zenny, etc.). Then, at least, the complaints would be about how slow/delayed the updates for certain storylines were. Then, at least, the various branches the dev created would eventually be handled in the game. Now, not only are what are arguably your most important choices ignored, but there's a good chance only one path will ever be finished by the time the game is "completed". Ugh. So annoying.

It's actually laughable that Delia asks you about how loyal you may or may not be and even tests you on it. After the "choices" the game forces on you, how could you possibly come across as having an ounce of loyalty? The game's BS reply by Ape that you're "sampling" to find the "perfect one" is just a joke.

 

[ThunderRob]

thing that pissed me off was..my path was Lena..she was my main-dame...past two updates because stuff is not implemented you have to witness the dame of your MC's desires..the one you want to commit to..cry be hurt see you cheat on her...sure..eventually the dev may get around to implementing the stuff..but the damage to the player is done..we immerse into these games and escape..so when we see our focus being eff'd with because of poor game planning it sort of makes ya say "fuck it"

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

thing that pissed me off was..my path was Lena..she was my main-dame...past two updates because stuff is not implemented you have to witness the dame of your MC's desires..the one you want to commit to..cry be hurt see you cheat on her...sure..eventually the dev may get around to implementing the stuff..but the damage to the player is done..we immerse into these games and escape..so when we see our focus being eff'd with because of poor game planning it sort of makes ya say "fuck it"

Yep, totally. That's why I said updates focusing on one specific path would still be bad, just not as bad. The only thing that, to me, might help do is to warn you ahead of time. If I knew an update specifically was going to screw things up with Lena, but that a later update was going to have the MC staying faithful, I could just skip the updates until I'm not a total scumbag. It also didn't help that you automatically sleep with Lena earlier. So when I then am forced to cheat on her twice, I'm pretty effing upset. I played multiple paths, so sometimes she wasn't the focus. Now I realize I was just wasting my time.

 

[jish55]

So this new update had me fuck Zaddie even though I didn't do that prior with the main playthrough? That's bad, as it removes the other choices I've made prior to this update.

 

[Engelstein]

So glad I dropped this, had so much potential.

 

[jish55]

basically tells you in the update...ya..i've fucked it all up for you being loyal to Lena or whoever ya choose..but i'll fix it if i hit my patreon goals..LOL...really makes playing the choices a "who the fuck cares" situation..because for two updates in a row we made choices and get a "message" it'll be assumed we did something even if we didnt..that REALLY destroys the want to keep playing..once fine..but two updates in a row..pfffttt..
i mean..Zenny says basically go away perv..no sex..next scene..Lena running away because you just had sex with Zenny...thats just really crappy..dont even release an update if you are gonna pull that shit.

Tell me about it, I was going the Hailey route, then I load this update to see Lena running away for no reason, only to find out I fucked Zenny who I haven't even touched throughout the game and apparently did it in front of everyone. Then during yoga, Hailey says I'm lying when I say I choose her. WTF creator? You're seriously going to screw your own game over because people aren't paying you to create it? Then why the fuck are you still making updates and trying to continue a story you're apparently miserable making? I mean fuck, I get it, you need to get paid, but how are you going to get more patreons if you fuck over your own game because you're being a per petulant child throwing a hissy fit?

 

[Dependable_223]

Adult elements include:
Voyeurism
Corruption
Harem
Spanking
BDSM
NTR
More voyeurism
BBW
Even more voyeurism
Who am I kidding? It's got everything except milfing

The way the story is progressing it is a matter of time we are forced to watch with unavoidable NTR even if we are remaining on the loyal path. This already happened on the loyal path even though never cheated on Lena. I wonder why no one added this tag by now since this game is clearly made with ntr in mind and how the story are progressing it is only a matter time we are forced to watch NTR even though the path we chose should have been avoiding this part ??

Hey man dont mind the NTR but this will be fixed when i get more patreon..

 

[ThunderRob]

The way the story is progressing it is a matter of time we are forced to watch with unavoidable NTR even if we are remaining on the loyal path. I wonder why no one added this tag by now since this game is clearly made with ntr in mind and how the story are progressing it is only a matter time we are forced to watch NTR even though the path we chose should have been avoiding this part ??

Hey man dont mind the NTR but this will be fixed when i get more patreon..

i wont see it..gave up..deleted..it is just a game like hundreds others i can play so is easily forgotten...

 

[Mormont]

that was a weird update , what the developer thinking

Some of the updates have been quite questionable but the start to this one is probably the worst so far seems our choices don't matter!

 

[Dependable_223]

i wont see it..gave up..deleted..it is just a game like hundreds others i can play so is easily forgotten...

This game is also missing some tags like Horror where your friend is killed.. I know the cop was pervert but he still cool friend to have.

I am sure many wont ever play it again if that did happen, even if he fixed this part in later chapters he already destroyed this by adding this part.. And nothing he does will ever fixed the forced part..

 

[jish55]

You know what's really funny, the game could have started with mc waking up at the pool if we didn't fuck Zenny, and the creator could have just left out some dialogue if we didn't fuck her. This would have allowed us to continue our path, the creator would have needed to do any extra work, and we wouldn't be so angry about how this game's going.

 

[Dependable_223]

I dont know if you need to glad but not sure about the part some like BBW how did they like the fact that Hildy was sucking G if MC was the one loyal to hildy ??

Did anyone played this part ?? i know for many Hildy was no option but i played many path including this one..

 

[jish55]

I dont know if you need to glad but not sure about the part some like BBW how did they like the fact that Hildy was sucking G if MC was the one loyal to hildy ??

yeah, that's pretty fucked up. I didn't take the Hildy path myself, but for those who were, it's a major dick move on the developers part.

 

[Dependable_223]

yeah, that's pretty fucked up. I didn't take the Hildy path myself, but for those who were, it's a major dick move on the developers part.

Then maybe next will be zenny, Lena, Gynna, Clara and mc will be forced to watch how these girls will sucking of some other dude even if they are on their loyal path..

About G part normally i dont mind that since he seemed harmless even though he knocked mc out at first. but if your not on Hildy path then seeing him and Hildy is not as fucked up but things change if next will be like G and Lena, G and Gynna , G and Zynny or G and clara if mc is on their loyal path..

This changes everything.

 

[Silver]

I am not a big fan women have hideous tattoos on them.

 

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