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I don't think so, I'll show you why it's easier to create Max's story.
A little Tease. Long script, renders from 0.44. The end is great

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Max: Aunt Kira, we're going to get caught here.
Kira: Relax, she has no power over me.
Max: But what do I have to do then?
Kira: Ann is coming here. Will join us.
Max: Me, you and her?
Kira: No you silly, just you and her.
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Kira: Now lay back, she's coming
Max: (I can not believe)
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Ann: Hi sis... Hi... Max.
Ann: I hope this sunbathing is worth it
Ann: 'Cause she can't see us
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Kira: Who? She? she's not here
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Ann: But it can come anytime
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Kira: Stop with this, I already said it's just the three of us
Max: Yeah, Lisa is not in my bedroom and Alice's bedroom is closed
Ann: But that's why, we're not alone
Kira: For a sunbath? stop mumbling and be quiet.
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< 10 minutes pass >
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Kira: You see? nobody is here. Why don't we do something?
Max: Do what Aunt Kira?
Ann: Kira, what are you talking about?
Kira: I want you to play with Max, right here.
Ann: KIRA! I CAN'T! What if she catches us? I can't do this, I better go
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Kira: Stop right there, I'll show you it's safe.
Max: Wait Mom, let's hear her
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Ann: I don't believe you're going....
Max: Shut up Mom!
Ann: Shut up.. what? what did you say?
Kira: Shut up! see how safe we are
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Max: (Aah Aunt Kira, it could only be you. Keep going...)
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Ann: (My sister is testing me with my... son?)
Ann: (This little whore... making me excited)
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Max: (Yes Aunt Kira, keep going...)
Ann: (hmmm I want to suck your cock)
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Max: Wait Aunt Kira, why did you stop?
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Kira: Ask your mother, we think now it's her turn
Ann: Kira? my turn? I do not...
Kira: Yes, you can. Come, come here
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Ann: Max, don't look at me that way
Max: You look beautiful
Kira: And HOT!
Ann: Okay Kira, what do you want me to do
Kira: I don't know, how about we start...
Max: Ride on me!
Kira: Max! Your bad boy...
Ann: Max, I...
Max: Come Mom, it will be fast. Ride on..
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Kira: Ann don't worry, I've already lubricated his cock.
Ann: Kira, it's not that.. I'm just..
Max: Just what?
Ann: Positioning myself
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Max: (I feel the head of my dick in your wet pussy. I knew she was excited
Kira: (hm. It's showtime)
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< Ann descends a little further, opening your ass a little to keep going down >
Max: (Aunt Kira, what a delight it is to see you like this)
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< Ann went down with all. A small moan comes out of your mouth >
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< Ann starts to fuck everything up, going down and up and wiggling your ass >
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< Ann won't stop moaning. Your moans can already be heard >
Ann: Go Max, don't stop, make me cum, fuck me hot
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< The loud groans make Kira excited, causing your fingers to meet your pussy lips >
Kira: (Yes, my boy, fuck her well, don't stop)
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< Ann go down and up, not stopping to ride >
Max: Tell me Ann, who I am?
Ann: You... aaaah... you... aaarh... are... my... hhhuuur... son!
Max: No, you bitch. Who I am?
Ann: You... mmmhmm... are... my... boy!
Max: No! I'm your Master! bitch!
Ann: Yeess.... arh... yes... you are my master!
Max: No! You are my slave!
Ann: Maaax... I'm almost cumming...
Max: So tell me bitch, who am I and who are you?
Ann: I am your slave... and.. you are... my... aaaaarrhh... maaster!
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Kira: (fuuuuck, this is exciting as fuck. I can not stop.. those two fucking remind me of good times)
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Ann: Aaaaarhhhhhh.... fuuuuuuuck this shiiiit... fuuuuck
Max: huuuurrmm....
< Ann moans so loudly it makes Alice look out the window >
Alice: (What was this? Mom doing things without my permission? Aunt Kira, you too?)
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Kira: That was a nice fuck.
Ann: Max, did I ever tell you not to cum inside me?
Ann: I don't take pills, you know that
Max: Sorry Mom, it was just creampie
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Ann: Max... oh my god... let me breathe. It was a good....
Max: Sex? yeah.. very good.
Ann: Don't do it again, okay?
Max: (Again? hm she wants more)
Max: Okay...
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Kira: You two were excellent, congratulations.
Ann: Kira, you cheap whore. Thank you..
Max: Where are you going?
Ann: I'm going to shower clean up the mess you've made inside and change into my clothes before she shows up.
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Kira: So, did you have fun?
Max: haha yea..
Kira: Max...
Max: Yea?
Kira: Pull out next time
Max: (Fuck no) Yes Aunt Kira.
Kira: See ya soon.

< 30 minutes later >

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Ann: MAX?! what are you doing here?
Max: This is my room, did you forget?
Ann: Of course not. But I'm cleaning it.
Max: That's no problem, I will be quiet in my bed
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Ann: Do you have her permission to watch?
Max: Permission from whom? Mom, you're talking too much, do your job.
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Ann: Now are you ordering me around?
Max: But am I not your master?
Ann: But that was...
Max: In the heat of our sex? I also heard that you were my slave
Ann: You're not going to start with that bullshit, are you?
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Max: I don't know, maybe yes maybe no...
Ann: Max, come on...
Max: Everything is fine. You better start cleaning up. To another bedroom for you to take care of.
Ann: I will be doing it.
Max: Start by clearing this table
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Ann: This table here?
Max: Yes. This table. Clean her.
Ann: Will you watch me clean it?
Max: Of course. Try to clean it well, because that's where Lisa likes to stay.
Ann: Yes, my son.
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Max: (Shit, she's starting to wiggle her ass. It's like she's teasing me)
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Max: Maybe if I thought of something, this whore is still not satisfied.
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Ann: Why are you looking at me like that Max. Am I not doing a good job?
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Max: You are. When you're done let me know.
Ann: But I'm done. I was waiting for your orders to stop.
Max: So I want you to clean something else
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Ann: What? I already made your and Lisa's bed.
Max: No, I want you to come here and...
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Max: Suck my cock
Ann: Max, I thought we had already done...
Max: No, you left and left my dick full of cum
Ann: But Max, you left my pussy full of cum, I had to go take a shower.
Ann: Why didn't you come with me?
Max: I went to answer the gate.
Ann: With your dick full of cum?
Max: I had to clean. Something you didn't do.
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Ann: So you want me to lick him?
Max: He's already clean, but I want you to suck it too.
Ann: A blowjob while I'm working?
Max: Yes, order from your boss. Start!
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Max: Yes, runs the tongue over the head and lubricates.
Ann: Max, I don't have time for you to fuck me now
Max: I didn't say I was going to fuck you, I told you to start sucking on me.
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Max: Yes Mom, put it up to your throat. Keep sucking...
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Max: Aaaarhhh... swallow all that shit, go.. clean everything
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Ann: Ok Max, I need to go. I can't waste any more time.
Max: Tell me if you liked it
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Ann: Yes, I like it
Max: Very well, continue with your work.

< In Alice's bedroom, moans are heard >
< Max opens the door desperately >
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Alice: Hello brother, I caught this little bitch doing some stuff
Max: Alice, but why are you doing...
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Ann: Max, please, don't say anything, go away.
Ann: Leave me alone with her
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Alice: With "her" you little whore? Will you call me Mistress Alice, do you copy?
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Ann: What the fuck of... Mis... OOOUCH!
Ann: Yes.. YES! Mistress... Alice. Mistress Alice. I did copy.
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Alice: Good. I think it's good that you call me Mistress.
Alice: And you Max...
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Alice: I saw what you were doing. You know she's under my command, don't you? only she obeys my orders.
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Max: Alice, wait.. I can explain. It's not her fault, it's my fault.
Alice: Do you really think I'll believe you? I saw her when she came out naked towards you.
Alice: I was suspecting it wasn't just sunbathing.
Alice: I just let go of the leash and this whore runs away from me.
Max: Alice, you are exaggerating..
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Alice: Am I overreacting? (I'm having fun)
Alice: Tell me, who's the boss in this house?
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Max: You..
Alice: ME!
Alice: Get out of here because I have business to attend to
Alice: Because this one asked to be punished
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Ann: OOUCHH!
< Alice slaps hard >
Ann: OOOUCHH!
Alice: Yes, bitch. You deserve.
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Alice: I think you learned your lesson. I can't take the leash off you and you're already gone.
Ann: Alice, these jokes...
Alice: Not Alice to you, Mistress Alice
Ann: Ali... Mistress Alice
Alice: Good, very good. You are excused from his services today
Ann: Thank you, Ali... Mistress.

< Hours later, Alice goes to Max's bedroom >

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Max: Alice, I think you're pushing Ann
Alice: Do you think? I'm just having fun
Max: But it can get out of control
Alice: Do you think? only if you allow
Max: No Alice, be careful... we are in agreement
Alice: Yes, I know that. By the way, I want to talk to you about something.
Max: What do you want to talk about?
Alice: I saw you fuck Ann, I heard her moans out loud
Max: So what?
Alice: So what... I want that pleasure too
Max: My sister, who wouldn't let me touch her, now wants to feel the same pleasure?
Alice: I'm not going to beg you
Max: You can't even make an effort.
Alice: Why don't you deserve
Max: Hmm.. Let me get this straight, you say I don't deserve it but ask me to...
Alice: Enough! answer my question...
Max: Alice, you know, men get tired too
Alice: Did you do anything else besides fuck Ann? Aunt Kira?
Max: Maybe yes, Maybe not...
Alice: Don't lie to me, I saw she left and you went to shower.
Max: And you doing what? watching me?
Alice: I... I.... I was busy.
Max: Busy with what?
Alice: It doesn't interest you.
Max: Alice.. come on.. Let's not hide things from each other.
Alice: Will you be in my room tonight or not?
Max: If the "mistress" wants, her wish will be an order..
Alice: Okay, I'll see you tonight.
Max: (Fuck, I need sexpills to fuck her, I'm tired)

To Be Continued
since you're obvisously going to continue spamming this thread with those, could please put them behind a spoiler so we don't have to scroll for 10 mins to catch up on actual discussion please ? thx
 

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Krugger, just as a heads-up:
In English, an unmarried female teacher is referred to by students as "Ms." {surname} or "Miss" {surname}.
For example: in this case, Karen would be "Miss Clarker" to any student as I do not think that she is married.
Similarly, Kate isn't married and should never be referred to as "Mrs."

Male teachers are usually referred to as "Mr." {surname} or just "Sir".
So in common terms, "Mr Adam" or "Teacher Adam" isn't right to a native speaker.
As a dialogue header (name label), it's fine to just use their names but when someone is talking to them it should always be {Title} {Surname}, like "Miss Greenwood" when a teacher is talking to Kate in an official capacity.

Even when talking to one teacher about another teacher, as is evident by Kate saying "Mr. Roswell" in one two pieces instead of "Mr. Adam". Well done there ^^

I also noticed that in one instance, Karen referred to Kate as "Mr. Greenwood". This is completely erroneous.
Krugger said:
Karen: Are you still a virgin, Mr. Greenwood?
Is Kate suddenly male?

I'm going to assume that Angelina is the original Russian name of the character Angela.
 
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Thanks for correcting me on this, you must already know that english is not my native language, but I have little knowledge I could say the basics. Sometimes, I end up getting a few words wrong. When you spoke of surnames, I had to think of something at the time, I don't know if Adam Roswell was any good, but his real identity is Aslan Sahin/şahin (Turkish origin) however I would be creating a script that he hides his real name or his real identity. Create a certain mystery in the character.

I also noticed that in one instance, Karen referred to Kate as "Mr. Greenwood". This is completely erroneous.
Is Kate suddenly male?
My eyes were tired at the time, I wrote both script instant, I would do more, but I ended up resting a little. So by mistake I forgot to put the "s", and for its correction, I understood that Mr. or Sir are male, married or not, and Miss or Ms. are female for single women and Mrs. female gender for married women.

PS: I've fixed it

But as for Alice saying "Call me Mistress Alice", wouldn't be wrong, right?

I'm going to assume that Angelina is the original Russian name of the character Angela.
I don't remember if her name was Angelina or Angela. So I put Angelina, I don't know if Angela would match or if it would be right.

Yes, I want to create a game with heroes and Glamour art. But the plot of the game will be similar to a Happy End. That is, an innocent girl comes to a big city and gradually becomes a whore and a submissive sex slave. My imagination is too poor for a detailed scenario. But this is about the kind of game I want to make based on Glamour
This will be a little difficult for me, there aren't many renders that help me put together a good script that makes readers interested in the story. I didn't mean to turn Kate into a cheap whore, but college stuff would happen under Karen's orders. I would also have to involve all the characters, I like to make the characters rich in their scripts, but the lack of renders and scenes doesn't allow me to do that.

So this is the most important thing. Kate becomes a whore and a submissive sex slave because she gets pleasure from it. And various events lead her to this, for example, he notices how Angela sucks Oscar in the men's room, or how Sofia and Alice lick each other in the women's room. Or, for example, how one of the girls caresses another in the college shower

Actually, this is exactly what DS wanted to do in Glamour, but because of greed and laziness, he took a simpler and easier path
I wasn't thinking of a script like that, for me things need to make sense. I don't get much inspiration from Kate's story, besides, Julia would be one of the hardest parts of my writing a good script. I wanted to create a rivalry between Kate and Angelina, because as Angelina is a cheerleader, this type of personality of hers is quite annoying, that is, she would deny Kate joining the team, or Kate would have to do some things.. then the events would start. Each character would have a script and everyone would be involved. It kind of makes it difficult for me. It's hard to say. Another thing, I created 3 small scripts, 2 from Kate's story and 1 from Max's story, I don't know if people liked it, I don't think so, then it would be a waste of time, I assume.

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I can't see your comment anymore, but, I wanted to show you that, the problem with this Big Brother is that DS could create a richer plot instead of a character you guys think about. Max's script for me is easier to create, although the story needs to be good surgically. In this script I made, I put Max as an alpha male I think a lot of people prefer Max to have that kind of personality. In BBAS, Max appears to be a doormat for her sisters, or simply a little boyfriend of theirs, something they don't like very much. But I realize that people don't tend to care about the story or what goes on inside it. That's why Max's story wins in DS polls, most care for the great renders he makes. In the story of Kate, Ruby, Sophie, Jane and Helen has great renders, but without many scenes of them. I don't know if their scenes would change anything, but a lot of people want to see an MC fuck them. DS so is taking a risk, giving them what they want. I don't blame him, most devs are like that, and i don't know why he would be different, so he.
 

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Are those images and scenes in the game.
If you're talking about my post, yes, the images are from the game's story but I adapted the story, creating a small script. But if you're talking about the new update teasers, they will be in version 0.48
 

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Thanks for correcting me on this, you must already know that english is not my native language, but I have little knowledge I could say the basics. Sometimes, I end up getting a few words wrong. When you spoke of surnames, I had to think of something at the time, I don't know if Adam Roswell was any good, but his real identity is Aslan Sahin/şahin (Turkish origin) however I would be creating a script that he hides his real name or his real identity. Create a certain mystery in the character.



My eyes were tired at the time, I wrote both script instant, I would do more, but I ended up resting a little. So by mistake I forgot to put the "s", and for its correction, I understood that Mr. or Sir are male, married or not, and Miss or Ms. are female for single women and Mrs. female gender for married women.

PS: I've fixed it

But as for Alice saying "Call me Mistress Alice", wouldn't be wrong, right?



I don't remember if her name was Angelina or Angela. So I put Angelina, I don't know if Angela would match or if it would be right.
All good and I did guess that English isn't your first language. While Roswell may not be a traditional name for someone like Adam, it could be that it was carried through the father's line. This might mean that he's a mixed race. Personally, I think it's fine as is.
As for "Mistress Alice"... I think that's alright.
 

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All good and I did guess that English isn't your first language. While Roswell may not be a traditional name for someone like Adam, it could be that it was carried through the father's line. This might mean that he's a mixed race. Personally, I think it's fine as is.
As for "Mistress Alice"... I think that's alright.
To be honest, I didn't really like surname "Roswell", I thought of something about Adam Smith. I know it would match more, but I thought about using this surname on another character and I was in a hurry. The idea I wanted to make is that he would be Turkish, studied at Istanbul College. He would be using a false name to work at Nicolas' college, I could create a backstory about him that would fit perfectly, or maybe not.

As for Mistress, it's Alice's personality of wanting to be dominant, but she's just having fun.
 

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To be honest, I didn't really like surname "Roswell", I thought of something about Adam Smith. I know it would match more, but I thought about using this surname on another character and I was in a hurry. The idea I wanted to make is that he would be Turkish, studied at Istanbul College. He would be using a false name to work at Nicolas' college, I could create a backstory about him that would fit perfectly, or maybe not.

As for Mistress, it's Alice's personality of wanting to be dominant, but she's just having fun.
Adam Smith was a real person, and quite the famous one:
 
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