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Krugger, just as a heads-up:
In English, an unmarried female teacher is referred to by students as "Ms." {surname} or "Miss" {surname}.
For example: in this case, Karen would be "Miss Clarker" to any student as I do not think that she is married.
Similarly, Kate isn't married and should never be referred to as "Mrs."
Male teachers are usually referred to as "Mr." {surname} or just "Sir".
So in common terms, "Mr Adam" or "Teacher Adam" isn't right to a native speaker.
As a dialogue header (name label), it's fine to just use their names but when someone is talking to them it should always be {Title} {Surname}, like "Miss Greenwood" when a teacher is talking to Kate in an official capacity.
Even when talking to one teacher about another teacher, as is evident by Kate saying "Mr. Roswell" in one two pieces instead of "Mr. Adam". Well done there ^^
I also noticed that in one instance, Karen referred to Kate as "Mr. Greenwood". This is completely erroneous.
I'm going to assume that Angelina is the original Russian name of the character Angela.
In English, an unmarried female teacher is referred to by students as "Ms." {surname} or "Miss" {surname}.
For example: in this case, Karen would be "Miss Clarker" to any student as I do not think that she is married.
Similarly, Kate isn't married and should never be referred to as "Mrs."
Male teachers are usually referred to as "Mr." {surname} or just "Sir".
So in common terms, "Mr Adam" or "Teacher Adam" isn't right to a native speaker.
As a dialogue header (name label), it's fine to just use their names but when someone is talking to them it should always be {Title} {Surname}, like "Miss Greenwood" when a teacher is talking to Kate in an official capacity.
Even when talking to one teacher about another teacher, as is evident by Kate saying "Mr. Roswell" in one two pieces instead of "Mr. Adam". Well done there ^^
I also noticed that in one instance, Karen referred to Kate as "Mr. Greenwood". This is completely erroneous.
Is Kate suddenly male?Krugger said:
I'm going to assume that Angelina is the original Russian name of the character Angela.
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Thanks for correcting me on this, you must already know that english is not my native language, but I have little knowledge I could say the basics. Sometimes, I end up getting a few words wrong. When you spoke of surnames, I had to think of something at the time, I don't know if Adam Roswell was any good, but his real identity is Aslan Sahin/şahin (Turkish origin) however I would be creating a script that he hides his real name or his real identity. Create a certain mystery in the character.
PS: I've fixed it
But as for Alice saying "Call me Mistress Alice", wouldn't be wrong, right?
NTRfun
I can't see your comment anymore, but, I wanted to show you that, the problem with this Big Brother is that DS could create a richer plot instead of a character you guys think about. Max's script for me is easier to create, although the story needs to be good surgically. In this script I made, I put Max as an alpha male I think a lot of people prefer Max to have that kind of personality. In BBAS, Max appears to be a doormat for her sisters, or simply a little boyfriend of theirs, something they don't like very much. But I realize that people don't tend to care about the story or what goes on inside it. That's why Max's story wins in DS polls, most care for the great renders he makes. In the story of Kate, Ruby, Sophie, Jane and Helen has great renders, but without many scenes of them. I don't know if their scenes would change anything, but a lot of people want to see an MC fuck them. DS so is taking a risk, giving them what they want. I don't blame him, most devs are like that, and i don't know why he would be different, so he.
Thanks for correcting me on this, you must already know that english is not my native language, but I have little knowledge I could say the basics. Sometimes, I end up getting a few words wrong. When you spoke of surnames, I had to think of something at the time, I don't know if Adam Roswell was any good, but his real identity is Aslan Sahin/şahin (Turkish origin) however I would be creating a script that he hides his real name or his real identity. Create a certain mystery in the character.
My eyes were tired at the time, I wrote both script instant, I would do more, but I ended up resting a little. So by mistake I forgot to put the "s", and for its correction, I understood that Mr. or Sir are male, married or not, and Miss or Ms. are female for single women and Mrs. female gender for married women.
PS: I've fixed it
But as for Alice saying "Call me Mistress Alice", wouldn't be wrong, right?
I don't remember if her name was Angelina or Angela. So I put Angelina, I don't know if Angela would match or if it would be right.
This will be a little difficult for me, there aren't many renders that help me put together a good script that makes readers interested in the story. I didn't mean to turn Kate into a cheap whore, but college stuff would happen under Karen's orders. I would also have to involve all the characters, I like to make the characters rich in their scripts, but the lack of renders and scenes doesn't allow me to do that.
I wasn't thinking of a script like that, for me things need to make sense. I don't get much inspiration from Kate's story, besides, Julia would be one of the hardest parts of my writing a good script. I wanted to create a rivalry between Kate and Angelina, because as Angelina is a cheerleader, this type of personality of hers is quite annoying, that is, she would deny Kate joining the team, or Kate would have to do some things.. then the events would start. Each character would have a script and everyone would be involved. It kind of makes it difficult for me. It's hard to say. Another thing, I created 3 small scripts, 2 from Kate's story and 1 from Max's story, I don't know if people liked it, I don't think so, then it would be a waste of time, I assume.
NTRfun
I can't see your comment anymore, but, I wanted to show you that, the problem with this Big Brother is that DS could create a richer plot instead of a character you guys think about. Max's script for me is easier to create, although the story needs to be good surgically. In this script I made, I put Max as an alpha male I think a lot of people prefer Max to have that kind of personality. In BBAS, Max appears to be a doormat for her sisters, or simply a little boyfriend of theirs, something they don't like very much. But I realize that people don't tend to care about the story or what goes on inside it. That's why Max's story wins in DS polls, most care for the great renders he makes. In the story of Kate, Ruby, Sophie, Jane and Helen has great renders, but without many scenes of them. I don't know if their scenes would change anything, but a lot of people want to see an MC fuck them. DS so is taking a risk, giving them what they want. I don't blame him, most devs are like that, and i don't know why he would be different, so he.
If you're talking about my post, yes, the images are from the game's story but I adapted the story, creating a small script. But if you're talking about the new update teasers, they will be in version 0.48
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All good and I did guess that English isn't your first language. While Roswell may not be a traditional name for someone like Adam, it could be that it was carried through the father's line. This might mean that he's a mixed race. Personally, I think it's fine as is.
As for "Mistress Alice"... I think that's alright.
To be honest, I didn't really like surname "Roswell", I thought of something about Adam Smith. I know it would match more, but I thought about using this surname on another character and I was in a hurry. The idea I wanted to make is that he would be Turkish, studied at Istanbul College. He would be using a false name to work at Nicolas' college, I could create a backstory about him that would fit perfectly, or maybe not.
As for Mistress, it's Alice's personality of wanting to be dominant, but she's just having fun.
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Adam Smith was a real person, and quite the famous one:
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Why do they put dialogue in the game with Max? I think it is better not to exist,only photos with max fucking is enough,after all I think those who play the game with Max do not know how to read.
Shame.. DS manages to create great renders, even a great plot, but when it comes to writing a story and bringing the characters to life, it ends up disappointing. Max in his version is a weak and fragile character as well as others. Too bad he doesn't know how to bring his characters to life, I wish I had your talent to render.
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Developer report.
The first half of 0.47 is almost complete. If nothing happens (for example, our translator loses internet / electricity), then we plan to release it tomorrow evening. Because 0.47 is so big, even half of it is comparable to some of our smaller updates.
Because of this and the fact that we missed one update at the start of the war, we could have renamed 0.47 part 2 and named it 0.48 instead. It will focus on the villa and will not include Julia or Kate. We plan to release it this month. All the images are ready, so we just need to write the code and text, which should not take more than a couple of weeks.
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Update has arrived!
MAY 9, 2022 AT 3:50 PM
We've said enough about developing 0.47 in our previous posts, so let's just skip to the things we've added in our latest patch.
There's a short series of events in the college swimming class, after which Max unlocks the option to visit Julia and Kate's house.
Once unlocked, Max will be able to visit them every day between 15:30 and 16:00. You can go to their house from Max's villa, or you can stay in college until it's time to go to Julia and Kate's.
A series of events on the couch in the living room.
A series of events in the backyard.
A series of events in the basement.
Max will also get to meet Maria, Julia and Kate's neighbor. She doesn't have any content in 0.47, but we can develop this story if you vote for it.
Fixed bugs:
Fixed a bug where Kate could've asked Julia to punish her outside the house.
The New world order quest log has been expanded to be more descriptive.
We're still going to update the online client with 0.47 and 0.48, but we're thinking of deprecating it relatively soon.
Of course, before we can disable the online client, first we have to add the support to move your save from the online to the offline client. The game already has this functionality. Just press the Export button in your online client and the click on the Import button in the offline client. The save data should be copied and pasted without any issues. You can also paste it in a text file and save as a backup, if you want. The offline client can update itself, by the way, even if it doesn't require an internet connection to play the game.
We also added an option to delete save files. The Delete button needs to be clicked twice to stop you from deleting your saves on accident.
0.47 we're releasing today is only the first half of the update we were planning, but it still has a decent size.
This release took longer than expected, but at least we already have all images for the next update (which we're going to call 0.48). We're planning to release it in the next couple of weeks.
Once 0.48 is out, we're planning to try out smaller and more frequent updates. We'll have some polls about this topic in the future.
As usual, the next post will have links to download our offline version for PC and Android.
Automatic updates should work as usual, but if you want you can download a build with all images from
MAY 9, 2022 AT 3:50 PM
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We've said enough about developing 0.47 in our previous posts, so let's just skip to the things we've added in our latest patch.
There's a short series of events in the college swimming class, after which Max unlocks the option to visit Julia and Kate's house.
Once unlocked, Max will be able to visit them every day between 15:30 and 16:00. You can go to their house from Max's villa, or you can stay in college until it's time to go to Julia and Kate's.
A series of events on the couch in the living room.
A series of events in the backyard.
A series of events in the basement.
Max will also get to meet Maria, Julia and Kate's neighbor. She doesn't have any content in 0.47, but we can develop this story if you vote for it.
Fixed bugs:
Fixed a bug where Kate could've asked Julia to punish her outside the house.
The New world order quest log has been expanded to be more descriptive.
We're still going to update the online client with 0.47 and 0.48, but we're thinking of deprecating it relatively soon.
Of course, before we can disable the online client, first we have to add the support to move your save from the online to the offline client. The game already has this functionality. Just press the Export button in your online client and the click on the Import button in the offline client. The save data should be copied and pasted without any issues. You can also paste it in a text file and save as a backup, if you want. The offline client can update itself, by the way, even if it doesn't require an internet connection to play the game.
We also added an option to delete save files. The Delete button needs to be clicked twice to stop you from deleting your saves on accident.
0.47 we're releasing today is only the first half of the update we were planning, but it still has a decent size.
This release took longer than expected, but at least we already have all images for the next update (which we're going to call 0.48). We're planning to release it in the next couple of weeks.
Once 0.48 is out, we're planning to try out smaller and more frequent updates. We'll have some polls about this topic in the future.
As usual, the next post will have links to download our offline version for PC and Android.
Automatic updates should work as usual, but if you want you can download a build with all images from
You must be registered to see the links
.