Ren'Py Abandoned Heavy Five [Ch.2RS] [Nottravis]

[Nottravis]

After seeing the comment about the tone of the thread possibly turning people away I figured that I would toss my first post (I think?) on f95 in this thread.

I think the thing for me about this thread is that it reminds me of what the internet was like in the nineties and maybe even early 2000's. It's at least partially due to rose tinted glasses of course, it wasn't like there weren't trolls or arguments. It just seems like somewhere along the line we went from conversations to one-liners and monologues. I suppose levels of intimacy on the internet is a really hard thing to describe. maybe we were more cognizant of the human on the other side of the modem? It sure does feel like some on the internet adopt a Baudrillardian view of internet interactions at least.

It's kind of funny to think about, but since we didn't have any sort of reference as to how one should behave on the internet, we used the polite styles of letter writing, or at least that's part of my guess. It also makes me realize how much more vulnerable it is to write like this than saying things like, "u mad bro?" and "triggered!"

While I don't find them intimidating to post in, threads that are half "save plz", "tell me this thing that was answered a page ago.", "this game doesn't contain my specific fetish! Dev, why did you create such a piece of garbage?" feel like a waste of time to comment in. They are, generally, a good place to find what you want by searching since nearly every question has already been asked if it's past a couple dozen pages.

after all those :words: here's some stuff about the actual game

Spoiler: That spoiler in a spoiler in a spoiler is giving me heavy…

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I also had been meaning to post to say thank you to Notty for making a game that actually feels like the author knows what it's like to be an adult. I think it's important for me to post that I sort of swooned when Chris asked for consent.

Spoiler: Annie route "funniness"

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Thank you so much for this

And I'm so pleased you seem to enjoy my little efforts at a game. I'm stuck in a hotel with just my phone at the mo so hard to give you a reply that does your thoughtful comments justice, but will respond more fully when I don't have to tap out each letter with my nails

But to answer one point you raised. Yep, she did. AC got blotto all by herself if there was no one there...

 

[PJWhoopie]

+1 for the hotel room....

Someone a few doors down left their dog in their room and its a howling. Funny thing though, they put the do not disturb sign on the door as they left.

 

[Nottravis]

*comes out of hotel shower*
*pics up phone out of curiosity while she gets dry*

*is so shocked she drops her towel!*

*Will glare at anyone who makes any "naked and soaking wet comments!*

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

After seeing the comment about the tone of the thread possibly turning people away I figured that I would toss my first post (I think?) on f95 in this thread.

I think the thing for me about this thread is that it reminds me of what the internet was like in the nineties and maybe even early 2000's. It's at least partially due to rose tinted glasses of course, it wasn't like there weren't trolls or arguments. It just seems like somewhere along the line we went from conversations to one-liners and monologues. I suppose levels of intimacy on the internet is a really hard thing to describe. maybe we were more cognizant of the human on the other side of the modem? It sure does feel like some on the internet adopt a Baudrillardian view of internet interactions at least.

It's kind of funny to think about, but since we didn't have any sort of reference as to how one should behave on the internet, we used the polite styles of letter writing, or at least that's part of my guess. It also makes me realize how much more vulnerable it is to write like this than saying things like, "u mad bro?" and "triggered!"

While I don't find them intimidating to post in, threads that are half "save plz", "tell me this thing that was answered a page ago.", "this game doesn't contain my specific fetish! Dev, why did you create such a piece of garbage?" feel like a waste of time to comment in. They are, generally, a good place to find what you want by searching since nearly every question has already been asked if it's past a couple dozen pages.

after all those :words: here's some stuff about the actual game

Spoiler: That spoiler in a spoiler in a spoiler is giving me heavy…

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I also had been meaning to post to say thank you to Notty for making a game that actually feels like the author knows what it's like to be an adult. I think it's important for me to post that I sort of swooned when Chris asked for consent.

Spoiler: Annie route "funniness"

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About your Yandere vibes, my theory is that the MC was abducted by Becca and is held in her basement ( a clue given by the basement location in the tutorial)

*comes out of hotel shower*
*pics up phone out of curiosity while she gets dry*

*is so shocked she drops her towel!*

Are you a snakeoil merchant ?

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Ava, your people tend to be mean to those they care about ( Chris told that about Amanda) so I'm not sure if I should be offended by the 'special' or be flustered by the compliment.... in the meanwhile I'm scheming how to charm Becca of her undies....

Just beat her on RPS

So am I after a certain render I saw recently.

See above

*comes out of hotel shower*
*pics up phone out of curiosity while she gets dry*

*is so shocked she drops her towel!*

Now THAT is a render we'd all like to see! wit woo *by render I mean photo, by photo I mean video replay* *okay, I'll calm down now and apologise profusely for my behaviour, my deepest deepest apologies miss Notty*

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

*Will glare at anyone who makes any "naked and soaking wet comments!*

That'll only happen to Avaron when she sees that post.

Oops, too late

 

[frap]

*comes out of hotel shower*
*pics up phone out of curiosity while she gets dry*

*is so shocked she drops her towel!*

Is this the "required" (aka trope-filled) "accidental nudity scene" for a new game you're writing? "My Life With a Game Dev" - I'm sure it'll do well.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Is this the "required" (aka trope-filled) "accidental nudity scene" for a new game you're writing? "My Life With a Game Dev" - I'm sure it'll do well.

I'd back it!

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

Let's not be pervs now!
Showers are nothing unusual, just because there's no shower peeping in the game, that doesn't mean regular showers aren't needed... get yo mind of the gutter! We have Sarah to perv all we want...

 

[somebodynobody]

Hotel? Oh no we all know what happens to Notty when she leaves her safety bubble. RIP Notty, you were too pure for this world.

 

[frap]

Hotel? Oh no we all know what happens to Notty when she leaves her safety bubble. RIP Notty, you were too pure for this world.

At least she has her phone and can communicate with us.

 

[Dripping]

*starts a hoax that Notty programmed her mobile to vibrate every time someone posts a message in this thread.
*watches thread explode with posts
*is glared at by Notty because she DID program her mobile to vibrate everytime someone posts a message in this thread, and she kept her phone hidden between her boobies..

 

[Goblin Baily: DILF]

*starts a hoax that Notty programmed her mobile to vibrate every time someone posts a message in this thread.
*watches thread explode with posts
*is glared at by Notty because she DID program her mobile to vibrate everytime someone posts a message in this thread, and she kept her phone hidden between her boobies..

Actually it's possible to set notifications on mobile.... but requires software skills far beyond Mike's skills

 

[DA22]

First 100 pages:

TLDR: Much funny bussiness, sillines and lewdness also some:

Notty renders not to be missed None of these might ever get into the game though:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433299 Not Notty but still nice
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433528
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1437414
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1447373
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1455494
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1461926
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1477069
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1481054
https://f95zone.to/threads/daz3d-art-show-us-your-dazskill.4764/post-1486150
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1486268
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1490034
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1488124 Notorious one
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1505202
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1505475
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1506502
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/reply?quote=1506531
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1513418
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1517684
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1519214
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1520077
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1523823
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1524165
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1524792
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1525995
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1527448
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1536008
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1538527
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1538532


Notty remarks about the game, do be aware though she is an innocent saint she sometimes misbehaves, glares, cackles, tempts and will take some liberties with the truth if she thinks it is warranted:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432429
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432813
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432993
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433317
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1435761
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1436245
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1451081
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1451241
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1466811
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1472518
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1475787
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1476738
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1478927
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1479524
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1480171
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1486969
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1503236
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1508461
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510005
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510999
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1511102
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1519085
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1522630
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1528128
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1529336
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1530463
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1530676
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1545755
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1545847


Some sleuthing by members of this thread:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1466479
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1467598
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1470917
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1476684
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510590
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1518564
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1534229
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1520576
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1540655

 

[popabear]

First 100 pages:

TLDR: Much funny bussiness, sillines and lewdness also some:

Notty renders not to be missed None of these might ever get into the game though:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433299 Not Notty but still nice
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433528
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1437414
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1447373
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1455494
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1461926
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1477069
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1481054
https://f95zone.to/threads/daz3d-art-show-us-your-dazskill.4764/post-1486150
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1486268
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1490034
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1488124 Notorious one
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1505202
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1505475
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1506502
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/reply?quote=1506531
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1513418
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1517684
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1519214
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1520077
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1523823
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1524165
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1524792
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1525995
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1527448
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1536008
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1538527
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1538532


Notty remarks about the game, do be aware though she is an innocent saint she sometimes misbehaves, glares, cackles, tempts and will take some liberties with the truth if she thinks it is warranted:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432429
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432813
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1432993
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1433317
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1435761
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1436245
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1451081
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1451241
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1466811
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1472518
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1475787
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1476738
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1478927
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1479524
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1480171
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1486969
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1503236
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1508461
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510005
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510999
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1511102
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1519085
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1522630
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1528128
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1529336
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1530463
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1530676
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1545755
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1545847


Some sleuthing by members of this thread:
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1466479
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1467598
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1470917
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1476684
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1510590
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1518564
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1534229
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1520576
https://f95zone.to/threads/heavy-five-ch-3-v1-2-nottravis.23184/post-1540655

You're doing the Lord's work son. Blessings upon you.

 

[frap]

First 100 pages:

TLDR: Much funny bussiness, sillines and lewdness also some:
...<snipped - whoa!>

Holy moses! You really took on your new role!

We bow to your enduring enthusiasm and dedication!

 

[DA22]

Holy moses! You really took on your new role!

We bow to your enduring enthusiasm and dedication!

Next 100 pages might take a long while, other things need doing on a Friday night
Edit: Yes I know it is Thursday but as a former studdent Fridaynights start on Thursday

 

[frap]

Next 100 pages might take a long while, other things need doing on a Friday night

Cool, cool. I bet no one will ever doubt my subverting of parliamentary procedure again.

I'll get that 20 quid to you as soon as I can - kind of difficult to send funds from Ophion.

 

[Nottravis]

*starts a hoax that Notty programmed her mobile to vibrate every time someone posts a message in this thread.
*watches thread explode with posts
*is glared at by Notty because she DID program her mobile to vibrate everytime someone posts a message in this thread, and she kept her phone hidden between her boobies..

I wouldn't have it between my boobs if I had....

 

[DA22]

Cool, cool. I bet no one will ever doubt my subverting of parliamentary procedure again.

I'll get that 20 quid to you as soon as I can - kind of difficult to send funds from Ophion.

Just send Notty that new motherboard and processor she wants and we will call it quits.