Maybe you missed the book I wrote, but I addressed most of what you said in this public patreon post:
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I played with all the possibilities and... Men...
I will try not to be so hard and still give my full opinion. I just want to make it clear before that, it is not my intention to attack something or anyone, but I will be quite sincere.
If the code for everything was difficult, don't add so many characters. The endings would have been much more satisfying if we only had Molly and Nikki. Because in the end, we didn't even have Nikki.
Of course there should be other girls, but not to the point where we would have any relationship with them for more than "one night". Of course, besides the blonde psycho.
Adding Sky even more in place of Jessica was such a mistake. Jessica would have saved a lot here, a complete character instead of two incomplete ones. Besides, Sky's story has no consistency at all. I read the reason, but it's just one more reason not to use Sky in this game. And in the end, they all ended up with an incomplete and unsatisfactory end.
About Nikki ... Look at my point of view, and what will be the point of view of anyone who plays this game from now on (especially if you think about putting it on Steam). You and others may have warned that Nikki and MC wouldn't have an ending together, but anyone who played after that didn't know it would be so. And nothing, I repeat, nothing in the game led to the belief that there would be no such end. After all, as is said at the end of the game, everyone expects that end for the simple reason that the two characters are the main characters, for the simple reason that it is the name of the game. And during the game we still have the explicit choice to leave her alone without having any other boyfriend. This is a huge tip that we chose this to eventually MC stay with Nikki. After all, why would we choose this so that in the end she would end up as the cat's aunt?
And let's face it, she's the best character in the game, of course most want her. Next time, don't spoil it or let the player's choice count for something.
It's nice to have at least one game where the ending is not so obvious, but that ending has to be a well done ending... Right?
One more detail I would like to add. Each character was different, with their own stories and everything, but the dialogues... If you remove the names and context, it will seem that everyone was the same person (because in reality they are, right lol). People speak differently, express themselves in different ways, speak different slang etc.
Anyway... For me, nothing here was satisfactory. But still, I would like to see a different result here because I see so much potential. It just needs to be harnessed correctly and completely. I am still looking forward to seeing the changes and how the game will look in the future. And, of course, it was really nice to see that the creator noticed some of his mistakes and sees no problem admitting and still wanting to fix them. GL.
Edit* Oh, one more thing!
Something has to be done about the "Fan-Made Walkthrough"! About the "gentleman/deviant points". Either he must be completely removed from the description or at least a note saying that such points no longer make any difference.
