I love all of these, especially the saturday night coming from the club ones. Both Alice and Kira are already tipsy, i always wondered why wouldn't there be some "moments" between the both of them.
As for the first one you suggest, Lisa masturbating looking at Max, there was a pretty hot scene in the original game that i feel really sad Aleksey hasn't remade it into this game. If i recall it correctly, it had something to do with Max unlocking porn access on Lisa's phone or something like that, and the scene was at night with Lisa laying on her bed watching porn on her phone, then switching to look at Max and touch herself. It was really erotic, and i wonder why Aleksey chose not to remake it.
Anyway, good ideas being thrown around!