VN Ren'Py Abandoned Family Fuckery [v0.1b] [Aason]

[Rex8501]

Synopsis be like :

Something strange occured last night with one of your family member... You woke up next to your little sister, as she was covered in cum. Yours? Probably. Investigate on what happened, and why!

Me : Already added game to my list.

 

[Aason]

I figured it out with a little googlery and looking at yer script file you are using the "show" to change between images use "scene" instead at least if I read the documentation right

You were absolutley right, I changed the script and now it's way better, I'll upload it here with the next update. Thank you!

Aason you have included multiple folders containing duplicates of the images used, that is why the file size is so large.

Right again. I kinda fucked it up, but it's arranged now. Will be better with next update. Thanks!

Any plans for android port?

Any way to get the android version? Thanks !

Added it!

Would have like to seen "stay and sleep." perhaps with a convince her that she was the real pervert like

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or don't forget the Head Pats option as when all else fails Head Pats

Otherwise neat start, an illusion of choice is interesting but fleshing out some of the less disastrous ones would be fun, having the family have names would also help make it patreon friendly and you can throw a patch in for those that like the true story (eh virtual pimps got to make a living somehow), you should one up most other startups by actually putting credits in the About tab with a link back to here or future funding page, rough drafts are nice but a real Intro for each girl would be better (how does the MC forget his best friends favorite drink? Seems like something the player should vaguely recall from a previous chapter then quiz them of how much attention they are paying to the story. Maybe a light prelude or just keep it rolling like the hangover), and while you may want to minimize the self deprecation "It seems that this path is not done yet. Fucking lazy dev." funny jabs just keep in mind by putting too many in and the game starts looking like swiss cheese lol.

Thank you for writing this comment. You're right, I'm gonna try to redo/add some dialogues and introductions. As for making it family friendly then make a patch, I wanted to do it, but I don't know how... I need to do better research.

I also want to translate it in french (as it's my native language) but for now I don't know how to do it either... Let's say 0.2 will be available in french ! (I hope). Even if nobody's asking for it.

Mom see's your erection..choices.."fuck it i'm gonna rape her" or "act innocent"...you wake with sis covered in cum..choices are "run away" "kill her" "stay put" the dev is trolling us right? basically..there is no middle ground in this game..either you go extreme or nice..theres no "lil bit of naughty" just sociopath or choirboy

You know, what you say makes sense. I'll try to add more "lil bit of naughty" choices as well.
Also, I remember seeing you on my previous """work"""! Did you find this one better?

So there's really not a lot in it right now, but I honestly really like what is here! There's a good amount of funny writing (be careful not to over do it though), nice and fairly unique looking characters like Clio (who I love btw) and some very degenerate writing here and there as well as some spicy options. Very well done so far, I look forward to playing future updates! It's certainly my kind of fuckery.

Thank you! Clio is my favorite as well ^^
As for the funny writing, I'll try not to overdo it, promised!

Or at least glints under (moon?)light like the sister's nail polish, what is just as weird.

Also, i think the glasses girl seems familiar...

Honey Select is kinda weird with the light, but I think I got it now. Will do better!
Aaaaaaaaand yeah, this is absolutely the same model, well seen! I love it, so you're going to see her, even if you don't want to

I understand first releases are incompleted... but having less than 5 minutes of content isn't promising...

I tend to believe I don't have high demands, as well I have extreme patience over the development of one game, since I prefer quality over rushed stuff, but c'mon, 5 minutes can barely be called a release, no offense.

0.2 will be longer.

so someone is trying to pick up pirot kings terrible humor

It's not my fault if we're both funny guys!

The gmae is pretty good but since the game is absolutely at its infancy, I'd recommend a makeover/remake for the visuals (Not being made with Honeydew) I'd personally recommend using dazz3d and Adobe PS for the models. and especially creating some models which are original. Honeydew models are too old school and sort of of the same ones in every game. One gets bored playing too many Honeydew games. the animations that you can create are also very limited with Honey dew. I know it's easily available and user friendly. but if you are going for not just good work and want something great, go for better softwares.

I would love to, but I tried dazz3d and I can't make shit... I'm kinda dumb it seems.
I'd like to draw the render. Too bad I can't draw as well.





Thanks to all the people saying nice stuff, and thanks to the other as well! Your opinions matters, and the next updates will be made with all you said in mind.
I'm really happy to see people enjoying and discussing what I made.

 

[ThunderRob]

no idea your previous work..i forget shit fast..this amused me in its audacious "zero fucks to give" presentation

 

[The Krypt Angel]

You were absolutley right, I changed the script and now it's way better, I'll upload it here with the next update. Thank you!

Glad I could help

 

[steelsmiter]

Might look into this when it gets bigger

 

[radical686]

My Comment:

No, of course not. I actually like small-breasted women in many games. Chloe 18 is one of my favorites. But, if you look at the last offered image, she looks maybe 11 compared to the other girls in the picture. My whole comment rests on how she looks compared to the other women in that image.

Your Comment:

You could say the same for some adult women in real life. Don't mean they don't deserve some loving because they're too small or young looking.

So, where in my comment did I say small-breasted or young-looking women don't deserve loving. I was commenting about her apparent age in one image that raised concerns and what I get is a lot of trollish responses. Apparently, the Moderators are pretty inconsistent when it comes to underage looking models, so I'm gonna just let it go.

 

[fulcrum]

It's not my fault if we're both funny guys!

terrible humor is still humor, especialy when it can make people laugh. but you should definitely be a lot more sparse with dead-end/bad-end single decisions. maybe make these fuck-you-up options actualy "psyche! you just thought" moments the character daydreams and increase a hidden perversion counter to unlock the real shit later

 

[NoesisAndNoema]

Why is this bloated with four copies of every image? The same exact images are in nested folders. This story should be like 1/4 the download size.

As for the whole "Age" thing... There is no "Look of an age". That is why "Legally", you "Need to present an I.D. to purchase cigs, porn and alcohol." Because, legally, you can't "look at someone", and determine their age.

As for a game... It is "entertainment", and in "entertainment", in the USA, you can portray many things that are not allowed in other places. Such as a little girl or boy getting raped, like in the movie "Hound Dog". Such as a little girl having non-consensual and consensual sex, with a grown man, as found in the movie and books, "Lolita". Also, as found in the legally protected websites, filled with millions of stories, under the names "ASSTR", "Literotica", etc...

Honestly, when was the last time ANYONE ever asked another person to confirm that they were actually, "of legal age of consent", before having sexual relations, then asking them to present an I.D. so it could be confirmed? (By the way, the "legal age", in most places is 13-16, which is in law and unwritten practice, due to the actual disagreement with the proposed "legal age of consent", which is honestly just to stop parents from trying to take every horny, consenting, teen to court. Historically and scientifically, by 13, you are a man/woman. It's only in social-stigma and anti-civilian-control which has pushed it to 18 in some places. Where it is rarely ever used, in a court of law, relative to it actually happening.)

 

[Aason]

terrible humor is still humor, especialy when it can make people laugh. but you should definitely be a lot more sparse with dead-end/bad-end single decisions. maybe make these fuck-you-up options actualy "psyche! you just thought" moments the character daydreams and increase a hidden perversion counter to unlock the real shit later

Yes, totally. I was thinkink about doing that. Kinda like in Behind the Dunes.
Game Over is not really funny.

Why is this bloated with four copies of every image? The same exact images are in nested folders. This story should be like 1/4 the download size.

Yeah, I fucked it up. I arranged it now. Next update will be better optimized.

 

[r_o_u_k]

I had fun with this one. A bit short for now, but with some interesting alternate choices. I with there were a resume menu after the game over screen, still. That way you wouldn't have to reload the last automatic choice.

With a bit of polishing (picture organisation in images folder, for example), this could really go some places !

EDIT: While i was writing this, the dev just posted above that he has sorted the pictures for the next release. Thanks!

 

[i107760]

Don't remove the small breasted character please, they are a rarity already. Enough big breasted content out there for those that love that.

 

[Maxou410]

The one who made that game got a problem with killing/raping relatives... o well *ZIP*

 

[Aason]

Don't remove the small breasted character please, they are a rarity already. Enough big breasted content out there for those that love that.

They're going to stay, don't worry!

The one who made that game got a problem with killing/raping relatives... o well *ZIP*

Not necessarily relatives :full_sicko:

 

[pxlzXppl]

Well shit damn fuck hell!!! Congrats on the game, well done! I'm only cursing and weeping that the one I've been a slave to toiling over has "Fuckery" in the title only because it's just about the best word ever! But if there can be a Star Trek and a Star Wars I suppose I can suck it up, dry these tears, and get back to work on mine with a final "Nicely done!" to you on yours

 

[voyeurkind]

It's fun. I'm in. Dev is obviously very new and still learning a lot, so I'll give a pass on the wonky graphics and other mistakes(The fact that he isn't asking for money yet also influences my opinion).

Regarding using HoneySelect over Daz3d, if I were doing a game right now I'd likely choose HoneySelect if only for the reason that I don't have a top of the line computer or the latest graphics card nor am I in position to buy them. It would suck having to wait hours and hours for every single render--not to mention being forced t either use the same models as everyone else does or fork out huge amounts of money for new ones.

Now, if only the Male Character Editor in HoneySelect had more options...

 

[ThunderRob]

checked yer name..found yer other game..remember it now..ya..glasses girl is a cutie..more of her..no killing her though..maybe some nice romance?...a legit LI..not a corpse to fondle

 

[Look-see]

mostly a basic game. but damn those options where funny as hell. every time i saw them i was like "no fuckin way" so obviously i clicked ever bad decision i could to see what happens.

 

[RogMR]

Very short version, but for the humor, the stupid choices, worth the download.

I have no problem with stupid choices (kill her, rape her) with game over. If the player chooses, the consequence can be bad. Humor is good. Some stupid choices are also interesting for the game. You don't have to have a kill her or rape her option every time, but sometimes it can be cool even if a game over comes.

A moderate option can also be added: "Hug mom and grab ass/boobs". Then, slap in your face. Not game over.

 

[fuckyouassholes]

Well, I didn't thought of it, for now, I don't think this deserve any support. I need to do better first.

now THIS is a learning dev right here !

good on you Aason ! keep learning and you will reach there !

 

[Aason]

now THIS is a learning dev right here !

good on you Aason ! keep learning and you will reach there !

Thanks! I'd like to take all your money, but right now, it would feel like scamming people.