VN Ren'Py Abandoned Kindread: The Redburns [Ch. 5] [Inkalicious]

[ilovejoda]

Good to hear about bro! Its a pitty that issue with the corrupted thing. Anyway, I am happy =)

 

[vendarr]

Just finished the current content. This is so good.
Pictures are great, but its the writing that makes them shine.
Love the characters. Hilarious and deep. So many cool (and twisted) ideas. So worth the wait.

Thank you, inkalicious.
Would love to support this if you ever decide to accept patrons. Just saying.

 

[sembolan]

Woooo let's gooo!!!

 

[Aaron Bursar]

Good to see you back, Inkalicious.

 

[zorny69]

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It's getting harder (har har) to update with spoilers, but here's a teaser image anyway.

Progress is crawling along. To give an indication of timing, this image took around 2 and a bit hours to build.
I. Am. Slow.

I also had to take a long break as I lost several large scenes due to corrupted save file.
I don't even want to think about how much time was lost. Not only in losing that work, but having to redo the same scenes. Soul destroying and a total b*stard to get back on the horse after that, but clamber back on I did. Sobbing all the way.

It's all good now though. Yep. All good...

And we're nearly a quarter way through 2022! Who knew?! C'mon Spring!

 

[Readyforwhat]

View attachment 1710456

It's getting harder (har har) to update with spoilers, but here's a teaser image anyway.

Progress is crawling along. To give an indication of timing, this image took around 2 and a bit hours to build.
I. Am. Slow.

I also had to take a long break as I lost several large scenes due to corrupted save file.
I don't even want to think about how much time was lost. Not only in losing that work, but having to redo the same scenes. Soul destroying and a total b*stard to get back on the horse after that, but clamber back on I did. Sobbing all the way.

It's all good now though. Yep. All good...

And we're nearly a quarter way through 2022! Who knew?! C'mon Spring!

Yeah,it's understandable. Accidents happen everyday, but we still have to keep up with the its pace. And still, thank you for all your hard work on this game, we will keep on waiting for the next release!

 

[Captain Feather]

View attachment 1710456

It's getting harder (har har) to update with spoilers, but here's a teaser image anyway.

Progress is crawling along. To give an indication of timing, this image took around 2 and a bit hours to build.
I. Am. Slow.

I also had to take a long break as I lost several large scenes due to corrupted save file.
I don't even want to think about how much time was lost. Not only in losing that work, but having to redo the same scenes. Soul destroying and a total b*stard to get back on the horse after that, but clamber back on I did. Sobbing all the way.

It's all good now though. Yep. All good...

And we're nearly a quarter way through 2022! Who knew?! C'mon Spring!

I'm honestly not sure if I want this scene to end in a gangbang or not. Hopefully it'll be an optional thing so I can get it in one route but not the other as I'm playing through all of them. It is admittedly strangely exciting though. Guess I'll have to wait and see.

 

[Solak]

I am 6'7", my mother is 5'6". I easily have over 150 pounds on her of muscle. I am damn near 50 and she is 75. Let me tell you, I have never shied away from a fight, or anything, but when my mother speaks or yells at me, I lower my head and say "yes ma'am", to this day. You want to treat your mother that way - fine. Most people who are not sociopaths treat their mother in a way, that you don't yell at her, because of you doing something, which is considered wrong in society (like, perving on your sister). I think the dev got that writing damn near perfect for a late teen aged kid living with a mother, and sister in a global shit storm.

I don't care who you are, your mother is the one person who can make you stop, and feel bad with just a glance, much less a few choice words.

Lucky you then, you've got a mother you can respect. Mine tends to complain almost all the time, she's too controlling, recently cracked my sisters down to tears and made her feel terrible about herself (moved countries back home, has to live with her for a bit), etc.

I used to sit down and nod as well, but she has to be fair. If it's clearly unfair, screw glance or choice words. Yes mom, I'm in bed at 10 pm and using my phone before going to bed, deal with it. I'm 30+ now and you shutting down the router won't strip away my internet connexion on my phone.

Now imagine that mom trying to slap down my hands or my Solak Jr. Unless it's justified, get lost. In this case, resorting to violence would be too extreme and I'd react, but I would take the lecture since I'm the one who screwed up. A parent's (or any authority figure's) gaze/word is only as powerful as the respect they've earned from you.

 

[Nubatron]

Lucky you then, you've got a mother you can respect. Mine tends to complain almost all the time, she's too controlling, recently cracked my sisters down to tears and made her feel terrible about herself (moved countries back home, has to live with her for a bit), etc.

I used to sit down and nod as well, but she has to be fair. If it's clearly unfair, screw glance or choice words. Yes mom, I'm in bed at 10 pm and using my phone before going to bed, deal with it. I'm 30+ now and you shutting down the router won't strip away my internet connexion on my phone.

Now imagine that mom trying to slap down my hands or my Solak Jr. Unless it's justified, get lost. In this case, resorting to violence would be too extreme and I'd react, but I would take the lecture since I'm the one who screwed up. A parent's (or any authority figure's) gaze/word is only as powerful as the respect they've earned from you.

Good thing porn games are there for fantasy and nothing more.

 

[Mtgwo]

View attachment 1710456

It's getting harder (har har) to update with spoilers, but here's a teaser image anyway.

Progress is crawling along. To give an indication of timing, this image took around 2 and a bit hours to build.
I. Am. Slow.

I also had to take a long break as I lost several large scenes due to corrupted save file.
I don't even want to think about how much time was lost. Not only in losing that work, but having to redo the same scenes. Soul destroying and a total b*stard to get back on the horse after that, but clamber back on I did. Sobbing all the way.

It's all good now though. Yep. All good...

And we're nearly a quarter way through 2022! Who knew?! C'mon Spring!

Always nice to hear of you! Patiently waiting for the update

 

[Solak]

Good thing porn games are there for fantasy and nothing more.

Trust me, the only fantasy my mother could be a part of would be psychological horror.

 

[Ogre]

this might be the stupidest question ever but...

this says "Chapter 5." Are there other Chapters 1-4, or is this the complete game (so far)?

 

[thorin0815]

this says "Chapter 5." Are there other Chapters 1-4, or is this the complete game (so far)?

All 5 chapters are included in the download. By the way, use the family edition. It makes much more sense plot-wise.

 

[Ogre]

All 5 chapters are included in the download. By the way, use the family edition. It makes much more sense plot-wise.

Ok. So the first scene in the entire game is MC cutting a hole and peeking in on his mom washing his sister? Because there is a lot of talk about earlier events, like I missed the earlier chapters of the game. Or maybe that's just a plot device?

 

[Captain Feather]

Ok. So the first scene in the entire game is MC cutting a hole and peeking in on his mom washing his sister? Because there is a lot of talk about earlier events, like I missed the earlier chapters of the game. Or maybe that's just a plot device?

Yes thats the first scene but the writing is good so the story doesnt pretend their lives just started there. The story gives us clues that this has obviously been ongoing behaviour and that hes already been warned about it. This both serves to make the characters feel more like real people and to skip some of that early 'discovering my female family members are attractive' part that can really drag in other games. It's a more natural introduction to the concept that the MC is attracted to his family and makes sense given the post apocalyptic setting.

 

[Ogre]

Thanks! Makes sense

 

[sembolan]

If it takes only ten minutes for a protagonist to show themselves a bitch, I leave a review. And hey, moron... I actually ASKED if it gets better. That's a simple question so I don't waste my damn time.

Funny how you're so mad at my reviewing the game - that you took the time out to review me.... thus doing the VERY THING you complained about. In fact, something worse - I at least had (quite a bit more) than ten minutes to go by. You had a few sentences. Maybe give it more than a few sentences before you assume someone is "venting" instead of just having a critical review. People don't need to be "mad" to complain. The only people who try that line of argument are either idiots who cannot handle the fact that not everyone likes the same thing. You want to enjoy being the guy who gets treated like shit by the girl, that's fine, enjoy your fetish. We don't have to.

Oh, it didn't occur to you that you're hypocritical as fuck? Wow. Guess you identify with letting someone beat the shit out of your dick and took it personal? Man, if I have to judge from the little reaction you gave, I'd have to say you identify with the loser becasue you are a loser. What a shame.

Bruh, nobody said for him to treat his mother like shit. In fact I said them being upset about his peaking on them was fine - because they should be. However beating him ON THE DICK is no different than beating a girl on her clit and is flat out abusive. You don't accept that shit just because "mother". That's bullshit of the highest order. What I said, is that the man should LEAVE. That's now equated to "treating them badly" and "sociopathic behavior" somehow? You've got to be kidding. And if you're talking about the sex comment - well no shit, it's a SEX GAME so it's relevant where it wouldn't be otherwise, moron.

If you want to criticize someone, criticize things they ACTUALLY SAID not bullshit you made the fuck up in your head. Throwing around terms like "sociopath" because not everyone sits back and takes abuse... I've experienced both good parenting and bad - literal mental, physical and sexual abuse - tolerating abuse from ANYONE is never the answer. If you're so pathetic that you take abuse (beating people on their sex organs) by pretending it's just normal parenting (the little crap you argued in your response that is in NO WAY comprable to what I said) that's YOUR problem. Maybe get some goddamn self esteem instead of letting people abuse you. And learn that the title of "mother" doesn't make one immune to being wrong/bad/criticized/evil/abusive or any other negative term. No different than "father" would. There are shit parents, of BOTH genders, and ANYONE who beats a person on their goddamn sex organs is a monster. Anyone who makes bullshit EXCUSES for it, is also a monster.

People like you are sick - you'd instantly say shit if a father beat a daughter on her clit, but a mother beats the son on the dick and "Oh, that's just fine." If anyone here is fucked in the head, that's you mate.

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Now, if anyone would like to answer the actual question I posed:

Does the MC get better? Does he stay a loser who is literally being abused by everyone, or does he grow?

This guy is not having a bad day. This guy is having a bad year. Holy wall of text batman

 

[Hans98]

I think it´s a great game and i really hope those evil comments don´t turn down the game developer!

 

[Milkchak]

This guy is not having a bad day. This guy is having a bad year. Holy wall of text batman

Omg... he sure as hell wasn't in a good mood when he wrote this.

 

[PopPop63]

If it takes only ten minutes for a protagonist to show themselves a bitch, I leave a review. And hey, moron... I actually ASKED if it gets better. That's a simple question so I don't waste my damn time.

Funny how you're so mad at my reviewing the game - that you took the time out to review me.... thus doing the VERY THING you complained about. In fact, something worse - I at least had (quite a bit more) than ten minutes to go by. You had a few sentences. Maybe give it more than a few sentences before you assume someone is "venting" instead of just having a critical review. People don't need to be "mad" to complain. The only people who try that line of argument are either idiots who cannot handle the fact that not everyone likes the same thing. You want to enjoy being the guy who gets treated like shit by the girl, that's fine, enjoy your fetish. We don't have to.

Oh, it didn't occur to you that you're hypocritical as fuck? Wow. Guess you identify with letting someone beat the shit out of your dick and took it personal? Man, if I have to judge from the little reaction you gave, I'd have to say you identify with the loser becasue you are a loser. What a shame.

Bruh, nobody said for him to treat his mother like shit. In fact I said them being upset about his peaking on them was fine - because they should be. However beating him ON THE DICK is no different than beating a girl on her clit and is flat out abusive. You don't accept that shit just because "mother". That's bullshit of the highest order. What I said, is that the man should LEAVE. That's now equated to "treating them badly" and "sociopathic behavior" somehow? You've got to be kidding. And if you're talking about the sex comment - well no shit, it's a SEX GAME so it's relevant where it wouldn't be otherwise, moron.

If you want to criticize someone, criticize things they ACTUALLY SAID not bullshit you made the fuck up in your head. Throwing around terms like "sociopath" because not everyone sits back and takes abuse... I've experienced both good parenting and bad - literal mental, physical and sexual abuse - tolerating abuse from ANYONE is never the answer. If you're so pathetic that you take abuse (beating people on their sex organs) by pretending it's just normal parenting (the little crap you argued in your response that is in NO WAY comprable to what I said) that's YOUR problem. Maybe get some goddamn self esteem instead of letting people abuse you. And learn that the title of "mother" doesn't make one immune to being wrong/bad/criticized/evil/abusive or any other negative term. No different than "father" would. There are shit parents, of BOTH genders, and ANYONE who beats a person on their goddamn sex organs is a monster. Anyone who makes bullshit EXCUSES for it, is also a monster.

People like you are sick - you'd instantly say shit if a father beat a daughter on her clit, but a mother beats the son on the dick and "Oh, that's just fine." If anyone here is fucked in the head, that's you mate.

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Now, if anyone would like to answer the actual question I posed:

Does the MC get better? Does he stay a loser who is literally being abused by everyone, or does he grow?

STFU and play it