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sirpedro7

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The main reason why I play a game is for the story, so I look at its coherence(of course depending on the type of stories you want to create), for now I think the story makes sense but I think there are gaps in motivation, for example that the MC has a relationship with his brother's partner and gets her pregnant can be understood by the personality of the MC(or at least the personality we are choosing for the MC) but it doesn't make sense that the "sister in law" wants to be his secret wife, it doesn't make sense that she wants to stay with the MC's brother, unless she genuinely loves the MC's brother and wants to be with both of them in a different way, in my opinion, we need to deepen or add some dialogues to the other characters to make their decisions logical. Also the MC says a lot that he loves women he barely knows which I don't disagree with as long as it was better implied that it's from a point of confusing desire/wanting to make them his "property" for someone or simply wanting to deceive those he tells(which would bring the problem that unless he says it to someone very naive it makes no sense), but whatever the case I think it would need some more introspection of the character for it to make sense for him to say those things.

Having said the above, it seems to me that most of the changes were for the better, the story and the game I think has potential, just need to define the motivations a little more.
 

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Translation to Spanish
Hello, translation Nº388, it is automatic and direct Spanish, using Sam's UnRen programs or VepsrP's Modification/Update and TulioACG's translation tool (link to his Tool).
Copy the game folder and replace.
Language sets itself, start and play don't touch the other languages if you have them.
Press the "A" key to change the font type if some letters do not appear.

https://f95zone.to/threads/lista-de-juegos-en-espanol-spanish-games.31851/post-10484867

Buenas, traducción Nº388, es automática y español directo, usando los programas UnRen de Sam o la Modificación/Actualización de VepsrP y la herramienta para traducir de (link de su ).
Copiar la carpeta game y remplazar.
Idioma se pone solo, iniciar y jugar no toque los otros idiomas si los tiene.
Presione la tecla "A" para cambiar el tipo de fuente sino aparecen algunas letras.
 
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privitude

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You are rich, smart man with a big dick who seduce any women that exist. Wow dev how long did it take you to write such a riveting and original tale?
It's a pornographic video game. The whole point is to vicariously do things which you're either incapable of doing in real life (you're super-rich and and financially spoil a harem of women) or which you could do, but typically come with a lot of consequences in real life (casual sex isn't hard to find, but runs the risk of emotional drama, STD's and unwanted pregnancies).

What exactly are you expecting? "In this game you play as a homeless drifter with a micro-penis that no one wants to be around. Simulate the hardships of life while NPC's refuse to make eye contact with you and your health declines until you die! What Fun!"

Maybe it should just have an entirely original plot like "for many years you had to go away from your family due to reasons, but when your dad died and you developed amnesia you came home and now your family and neighbors all have huge tits. What will you do?!"
 
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privitude

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Dev it would be nice if you put the planned tags for this one in "Genre spoiler", are the fetishes/kinks going to be avoidable (they don't happen in the story by player choice) skippable (they happen but the player doesn't see the scene) forced by plot, or maybe to avoid X content the player should avoid X Li?
I'd like to know this myself. Optional kinks for those who are into it are good. Forced kinks can completely ruin a game for a lot of people.
 
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masterdc1976

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nice update :)

the game started very well, now its even better,
looks like it if getting to be one of the good ones
 

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It's a pornographic video game. The whole point is to vicariously do things which you're either incapable of doing in real life (you're super-rich and and financially spoil a harem of women) or which you could do, but typically come with a lot of consequences in real life (casual sex isn't hard to find, but runs the risk of emotional drama, STD's and unwanted pregnancies).

What exactly are you expecting? "In this game you play as a homeless drifter with a micro-penis that no one wants to be around. Simulate the hardships of life while NPC's refuse to make eye contact with you and your health declines until you die! What Fun!"

Maybe it should just have an entirely original plot like "for many years you had to go away from your family due to reasons, but when your dad died and you developed amnesia you came home and now your family and neighbors all have huge tits. What will you do?!"
Why everyone always talks about casual sex like is some shady unprotected act in a dead-end dark alley with a random stranger? Like, casual sex most of the time (to not say almost always) is only sex with a person that you dont have (yet) a relationship (boyfriend/girlfriend, Husband/wife, etc.). Yes, could be a stranger, but no a stranger that you met him/her literally 10 seconds ago
 

quiboune

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Decided to give it a shot and it's a good story overall, but the writing is lacking.

The game has a good enough setup, allowing you to jump headfirst into the scenarios that show up (met a hot chick? you can flirt with her straight away; met a vulnerable girl? you can abuse that vulnerability; having sex? you can cum inside; caught having sex? ignore whoever caught you and finish; someone attractive in front of you that you should morally not be into? you can go for it anyway; in summary, no bullshit) and there are plenty of sex scenes. However,

Some of the sex scenes are really bad.
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I hope you like this view because it's the longest scene in the game currently. You're forced to watch this flabby dude in a froggy pose for like a 100 lines while he eats someone out. I'm not into cunnilingus at all, so it would be nice if we could skip this entire scene somehow or choose a different action - doesn't even have to be sex, if we were allowed to confront her before jumping in and we talked while standing, dressed, I'd be happy and the dialogue would make much more sense.

We haven't met the MC's family so far but he mentions a bunch of boys iirc, which could be a choice to allow the player choose whether they have sons, daughters, mixed kids... also, the MC says "I never thought I'd ever touch someone so young!" at one point, and I believe this is a huge fumble. The Dev could ditch this line and then later when introducing the MC's family show that he has been raising and training his wife and daughters to be a harem of sorts.

I also like dialogues - I love you and I love you, ctrc + c, ctrl + v and so on 10 times, although not even a day has passed since their first meeting. Again, with such "love" at first sight, brother mc here is the third wheel and the addition of background to version 0.1 not only did not add the meaning of what was happening, but vice versa
This is kinda confusing but he hit the nail on the head. Dialogue is very repetitive with the love thing, and it makes no sense. MC's first interaction with his affair is extremely weird and unnatural, talking about loving the girl because she's important to his brother and part of the family again and again. The writing is really bad on that front.

All that said, if the game keeps the rhythm up and improves on its flaws, it's bound to be one of the best out there. Godspeed, Dev!
 
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